OUGD501 / Practical / Crit scrawl

How could I develop my practical outcome further?

• "More things like forms, posters etc need to be created in order to get a proper feel to what the surgery is like."

• "For 'surreal' I would attempt to manipulate type and position more to create an uncomfortable, awkward feel to the design."

• "I like the 'breast is best' poster, think of more humours things like this?"

Feedback?

• "Try to include some more cheesy shapes similar to the heart?"

• "The stretched / distorted type is successful - maybe take this further and think TACKY"

• "I really like the theme and concept, the colours say medical, but have just enough awkwardness."

• "I agree, really great colours and type choices - just need a wider range of designs / posters." 

These were the main points said in the crit scrawl, I will take all this on board and create more collateral. Something else which was said a few times is that they weren't sure on what the era was, I took this as a good thing as it's not meant to reflect a specific era.